Re: Promote the donation campaign? home page suggestion

From: Arthur Keller <arthur_at_kellers_dot_org>
Date: Thu Oct 28 2004 - 19:38:48 CDT

At 7:13 PM -0400 10/28/04, Kathy Dopp wrote:
>Suggestion:
>
>On the home page, change these two sentences:
>
>"It will take on-going support to bring the OVC solution to our voting
>booths. A thousand or more supporting memberships at $10 per month will
>ensure OVC's work can continue."
>
>("continue" is too weak for me to donate $)
>
>so change to this one sentence:
>
>"The on-going support of a thousand or more supporting memberships at $10
>per month will bring the OVC solution to our voting booths."

Will $10,000/month really bring the OVC solution to our voting
booths? I think not. I think the main difference is that the OVC
will be able to begin to pay Alan.

Maybe you should say "will HELP bring the OVC solution...."

Best regards,
Arthur

>This is much cleaner and we're trying to sell OVC contributions, not be
>100% accurate. (Have confidence in what we can accomplish.) I've noticed
>that winning bids always underbid and overpromise and then ask for more
>money later. ;-)
>
>Regards,
>
>Kathy

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