Promote the donation campaign? home page suggestion

From: Kathy Dopp <kathy_at_directell_dot_com>
Date: Thu Oct 28 2004 - 18:13:08 CDT

Suggestion:

On the home page, change these two sentences:

"It will take on-going support to bring the OVC solution to our voting
booths. A thousand or more supporting memberships at $10 per month will
ensure OVC's work can continue."

("continue" is too weak for me to donate $)

so change to this one sentence:

"The on-going support of a thousand or more supporting memberships at $10
per month will bring the OVC solution to our voting booths."

This is much cleaner and we're trying to sell OVC contributions, not be
100% accurate. (Have confidence in what we can accomplish.) I've noticed
that winning bids always underbid and overpromise and then ask for more
money later. ;-)

Regards,

Kathy

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