Re: new site update

From: Arthur Keller <arthur_at_kellers_dot_org>
Date: Wed May 26 2004 - 17:47:00 CDT

At 4:39 PM -0400 5/26/04, David Mertz wrote:
>>here is what we have: http://openvotingconsortium.org/new/
>
>Looks nice. Clean. Accessible.
>
>Few things though:
>
>(1) Home page. Please change:
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> The systems will also support voter verified ballots...
>
> to:
>
> The system will produce voter verifiable ballots...

Be redundant. Make it "voter-verifiable paper ballots" (and you need
the hyphen).

Best regards,
Arthur

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