Re: Comments requested on slides

From: Alan Dechert <alan_at_openvotingconsortium_dot_org>
Date: Sat Jun 26 2004 - 12:51:37 CDT

Arthur,

> Did you select
> all the text from the .mov file?
>
I had no role in the .mov file except to accept Doug Cragoe's offer to make
one. At this point, asking him to make wholesale changes could be counter
productive. It's pretty good as-is and I appreciate his efforts.

I'd like to see the first screen include the "April 1st" instead of just
April.

The text that is most problematic is where he has "One ballot instead of
two...."

DREs really have only one ballot--the electronic one. Proposals to add a
printer confuse this issue somewhat, but the ballot is still electronic
while the paper is part of an "audit trail." The OVC system has a paper
ballot with an electronic audit trail that includes electronic ballot
images.

I don't think we want to add a lot of text to the video. My sense is that
Doug has the right amount of text but we need a few edits.

Alan D.
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