Re: AB 2097 Fact Sheet, first cut

From: Arthur Keller <voting_at_kellers_dot_org>
Date: Wed Feb 22 2006 - 00:39:59 CST

At 8:18 PM -0500 2/21/06, Chris Franklin wrote:
>A couple of suggestions:
>
>Change "vendors publicly to disclose" to "vendors to publicly disclose".

Or "vendors to disclose publicly"

> Hope this helps,
>
> - Chris

Best regards,
Arthur

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