The welcome to the mailing list letter, suggested revisions

From: Ed Kennedy <ekennedyx_at_yahoo_dot_com>
Date: Mon Apr 19 2004 - 23:21:14 CDT

Hello All:

     This letter is meant to be viewed in HTML. Arthur asked me to look over the welcome letter and then suggested that he wanted the rest of the group to review and comment. Some comments will be in bold. I'll make my suggestions for inserts in italics and deletes in underlines. [Comments and explanations are in brackets.] Put the information immediately below, first.

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This list, maintained by Arthur Keller (arthur@kellers.org), is for those participating in the project to demo and prototype a PC-based voting machine with a voter-verifiable ballot. [I believe you have already demo'ed the program and now are moving to a pilot program.] Here's the general information for the list you've subscribed to, in case you don't already have it: [Remember, underscore means delete. Also, "...the..." implies that the statement below is comprehensive and complete.]

    This list has been in existence since ww/xx/yyyy and a great many issues have been discussed. We've tried to summarize the discussions in a FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) [link]. Should you feel that your questions have not been answered in the FAQ [which is certainly a possibility] you may wish to try accessing our correspondence archive [link to correspondence archive that explains how to access and search the archive]. If your question is not covered or unclear there, feel free to write us at voting-project@lists.sonic.net . Please don't feel discouraged about these two simple requests. We're actually a sociable bunch but most all of us have day jobs and want to stay focused on the goal of moving forward on making available a practical, open source, voter verified, electronic ballot system that we can all trust. Your opinions are always welcomed.

Signed,

contact information, etc.

[Then you can move onto how to unsubscribe. Currently it effectively comes first which is bad marketing. You want people to generally stick around. Besides, timewise and logically, it's more appropriate to put that near the end.]

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Thanks, Ed Kennedy

----- Original Message -----
From: "Arthur Keller" <arthur@kellers.org>
To: <voting-project@lists.sonic.net>
Sent: Sunday, April 18, 2004 3:56 PM
Subject: [voting-project] Fwd: failure notice

> This is the message sent to new users. If you have suggestions for
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